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    Ivan Villafaina

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    Being polite in a introducing email!!

    Post by Ivan Villafaina on Tue Jun 05, 2012 11:22 am

    Clive, I would like to introduce me myself to my landlord in Cheltenlham by email in a polite way.. but not so much antiquated, can you check if I'm correct with this email:

    Hello, I'm writing to you to introduce me myself because yesterday the organization given gave us some information about you, as like your email address.
    You might know this already it, but my name is Ivan Villafaina, I'm a photographer and a photography teacher in an Art School.

    I'm really excited about our time in Cheltenham and I hope it'll be a great experience!

    Here you can know see some of my work and also find out about me!: www.ivanvillafaina.com
    Best regards.


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    Clive
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    Re: Being polite in a introducing email!!

    Post by Clive on Tue Jun 05, 2012 12:12 pm

    Yes, it's fine. I just corrected a few things!

    Ivan Villafaina

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    Re: Being polite in a introducing email!!

    Post by Ivan Villafaina on Tue Jun 05, 2012 12:29 pm

    Thank you very much, Clive! send it!!!

    Ivan Villafaina

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    Re: Being polite in a introducing email!!

    Post by Ivan Villafaina on Wed Jun 13, 2012 7:27 am

    They don't answer haven't answered my email!!! bounce bounce bounce bounce bounce
    Maybe they don't have internet at home!??
    They are reconsidering to me as a guest option??
    Maybe the email address was incorrect??

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